Saturday, April 6, 2013

Queen of Arèthane Excerpt; from the chapter "Burning a Path"


There were more patrons at the other inn and with them, much more noise.  It made it easier for Dafne to hide away, tucked into a corner booth, her ears sensitive to the talk around her as she twirled her room key around her finger.  It helped to drown out her own thoughts and doubts, hearing those of the elves.
Most traded stories of their adventures on the seas, some spoke of loved ones back home, but the point all seemed to come back to, the fear they all shared was the looming threat of the wizard’s army and which village he would hit next.
Many that crowded the inn were displaced refugees of villages sacrificed to Jabari’s fire and vengeance.  They had lost everything and escaped with barely their lives, some not even that.  Most argued and bellowed angrily over the Queen’s lack of action.  Some, who seemed more thoughtful than others, attributed that to the Council’s required vote.
“The Queen isn’t allowed to mobilize the troops for war without the Council’s approval and they voted against it,” one elf said to the group standing at the bar. 
Karawyn had lost the vote?  Dafne wondered how the world hadn’t been beaten down by a constant storm fueled by her sister’s wrath at losing anything, much less something as important as the vote.
“The Queen is gifted, she shouldn’t need the vote,” chimed in another. “She should just fight.”
“But then we’d be complaining now about her lack of diplomacy and not following the rules instead of her inaction,” retorted the voice of reason.  A low chorus of grumbles and huffs followed.
“Her people are dying,” a female voice lamented. “Certainly she wouldn’t continue to let them suffer.  Certainly she doesn’t fear the wizard.”
Karawyn didn’t fear the wizard.  Her deep-seeded betrayal burned away any other emotion, but for hate.  Dafne; however, still felt the stirring of sorrow over losing her beloved guardian.  The loss cut deep, deeper than the deception.
“And where is the Prince?” another asked.  Dafne perked up, looking their way.
“Probably taken up with his human,” another grumbled, earning a scowl from Dafne.
“No, his absence during these times is notable,” said Reason. “He hasn’t been to any of the council meetings; word is that he’s disappeared.”
“Do you believe the stories that he was involved in all of those killings with the Angel of Death?” a new voice asked.
“They were doing what was ordered of them, what the Queen had warned…”
Dafne wanted to growl with frustration.  She didn’t care about the legends and rumors; she knew exactly what happened with Jarrad and Aerath concerning those aligned with Jabari’s army.  She wanted to know why they thought her brother had disappeared.
“It’s a lot nicer in here,” Baelemar observed, sitting down beside Dafne only to frown at her expression of frustration. “What’s wrong?”
“They’re saying Jarrad has disappeared.  And Karawyn lost the vote.  Do you know anything about that?” The words rushed from Dafne on a single breath.
With a look of guilt, he said, “I received word when looking for the horses.  A scout delivered the note.  Your brother was arrested by the Elders.”
“Arrested!” Dafne cried, not caring if anyone noticed. “How can that be?  I didn’t even know they did that!”
“They exact punishments for certain crimes committed.  Emily broke the Ancient Treaties by killing Zoroaster.”  Dafne closed her mouth, knowing at the time it had been a crime but had hoped then it would go unnoticed. “Because she’s human, Jarrad is serving her punishment for her.”
“What does that mean?”
Baelemar shook his head, sympathetic.  “I don’t know.”
“What are these punishments?”
“Not something you want to know more about, but your brother is strong and powerfully gift, I’m sure he’ll be fine.”


Friday, April 5, 2013

Another Year Older

There will be no new post today - sorry!  It's my birthday so instead of writing, I'll be out enjoying this beautiful day.  But be sure to check back in over the weekend - I may have some teasers for you from book 4!

Best,
Kelly

Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Share Your Jarrad

I dedicated Prince of Arethane to my brother, Joey, and my sister, Dominique because as a very rudimentary mold, I used the three of us as the basis for Karawyn, Jarrad and Dafne.  Essentially it was just the features - I have dark hair, green eyes, my brother and sister both have blonde, curly hair and blue eyes. I can be...sullen and sarcastic.  Dominique is always happy and everyone loves her, and Joey is somewhere in between.  So that's where the royal elves began and then they all developed their own personalities along the way.

To see their faces in my mind, I had to go seeking actual people because once I gave them names and heard them speak, they were no longer my family, but became their own people (er, elves.)  In writing and developing Jarrad, I initially based him on Alex Pettyfer.  He was exactly how I saw Jarrad in my head.



But then he started to appear in more movies and in more interviews and turned out to be kinda douchey, which is not how Jarrad is at all.  So Jarrad out-grew Alex.

And then I watched an episode of Austin & Ally and discovered Ross Lynch and he sort of fit Jarrad.  Right age, right personality--outgoing, a little cocky, playful (as far was the show showed.)



But after discussions with friends, they were not having that.  He's way too young, they said.  He's not rugged enough, they said.  So we eventually landed on this guy.


I have no idea who he is, but they agreed he worked.  Anyway, it made me curious as to how the reader sees a character compared to how I see him.  And I fear offering these photos may be dangerous, it may adulterate what the reader has created in their mind for a character they love, no matter how much fun it is for me.  But it really just makes me curious so if you have a Jarrad, I would love for you to share him.

Best,
Kelly

Reader Spotlight! Aubrey Davidson


Today marks my first “Reader Spotlight” post that I hope to have at least once a month.  What this is, is I will choose a reader from my Twitter or blog followers and after PMing them and getting their approval, have a little Q&A session with him/her about reading – what your likes, dislikes, habits are and such.  I think it will be a fun way to develop a more connected relationship with my fellow readers and of course, we get to chat about what we all love – books! 

My alpha Reader Spotlight is actually my beta reader, first-ever supporter and very good friend, Aubrey Davidson.



Without her encouragement and notes of “More please” on random pages of quickly written chapters, none of my Arethane books would exist.  She has helped create and develop the characters and probably knows them now better than I.

Anyway, welcome, Aubrey!  Tell us a little bit about yourself.

Age, Hometown/Where you live:  Hi, Kelly!  Thanks for having me on your blog (I feel like a guest on a teevee talk show)!  Editor’s aside: you’re a dork.   I’m 28 and my hometown is Arlington, Texas, but I’m living in Aurora, Colorado now  (as you well know).

Welcome to the first ever Reader Spotlight!  First off, tell us a little about your readerness (yes, it’s a word, I’m making it one.)  Meaning, where are you favorite places to read, how often do you read, what genre is your “go-to” when you need to fill that reading hunger?  Readerness, huh?  Okay, I don’t know that I really have a favorite place to read… I’ll read anywhere, but I suppose the most common place is in my bed or curled up on the couch.  Editor’s aside: And sometimes you fall asleep sitting up with the book still open.  Preferably with a cup of tea.  I read a lot.  Every day, multiple times a day, usually.  Especially on the weekends when I don’t have to worry about going to work the next day.  I don’t think I have a go-to genre either… I’ve been reading quite a bit of fantasy lately, but right now I’m reading a series of non-fiction journals. 

In order for least to most, what would you say your top three books are? (Ugh, I think you’re trying to make this difficult for me)  Top three books… can I count the Arethane series as one book or do they count as three?  Editor’s aside: Top three Number Ones!  And I don’t think I could choose an order – it’s hard enough to pick three favorite books.  The first other two that come to mind are American Gods by Neil Gaiman and The Arm of the Starfish by Madeleine L’Engle.  EA: I knew you’d pick that.

Favorite author? Those are some favorite authors too… Neil Gaiman, Madeleine L’Engle, and you. EA: Yay!  I’ve also been reading quite a bit of Terry Pratchett lately.  By the way, have you read Dodger yet?  If you haven’t, go pick it up – you’d like it.

What do you look for in a main character?  Do you want him/her to be some butt-kicking badass, a level-headed pacifist, a hot-tempered hero? In a main character, I mainly look for someone who has some quality I can relate to… they  might be a badass or a pacifist or a hot-tempered hero – that part changes, but if there’s something in them that feels like me or how I wish I could be, I generally keep reading.

What are your character pet-peeves?  I hate whiney characters.  I don’t like whiney people in general (and don’t you dare say anything about me being whiney!) and if they annoy me in real life, I certainly don’t want to spend my free time in their head with all of their self-pity.  EA: You had a big hand in keeping Emily from being whiney when she had plenty to be whiney about.

What do you look for by the time you finish a book?  What expectations do you have going into a book? I like books that make me miss the characters.  If I finish a book and I wish there were more because I don’t want the characters to leave my head, I’ll probably read it again… and again.  I try not to have expectations going into a book… that’s an easy way to disappoint yourself.  If I ever expect things from books, it’s usually sequels.  If the first book was amazing, I expect the sequel to live up to it.

I agree.  I love and hate when a book won’t leave my mind.  On one hand, I want to move on, but on the other, I know that it was then a really well-written story with strong characters.  What are you currently reading? I’m currently reading The Summer of the Great-Grandmother by Madeleine L’Engle

What kind of story would you love to read, but just can’t seem to find? This last one is hard… and I don’t think I can answer it… I’m sorry.  I’ll think about it and get back to you.

Okay, fine.  Then to ease the girly-girl in me, which of my characters is your favorite and why?  I’m partial to Emily… I love her and since she reminds me so much of my baby sister (and a little of you), I really like her being in my head.  But then Jarrad and Dafne and Karawyn are all wonderful too… and Shelly cracks me up every scene she’s in so she’s lots of fun… and I think Jabari is an awesome character.  I’ve loved him and hated him and felt betrayed along with the characters in the story… I really like when a character blind sides you like that.

A great big thank you to Aubrey for participating in my pilot Reader Spotlight and for helping me with all my books and for generally just being awesome.  

Until next time!

Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Always Me Playlist

Something I did for the paperback of Always Me but didn't do for the Kindle version was offer an Always Me playlist - basically the songs that I consider the soundtrack for the novel, that help convey the story in another format.

Music is a great aid in the writing process to get into that mindset or mood needed to create a certain scene.  I tend to go to different genres for different books.  Sometimes it's a little difficult coming up with the playlist.  I shudder to think how I would compile one for the Arethane series.  It would obviously have to be broken up by book, but I do promise to offer that, as well.  Maybe when all 4 are published.

Anyway, it was easier for Always Me.  The soundtrack for the story was as distinct to me as the characters.  So, I hope you enjoy, the Always Me playlist: 


1. "The Ghost Who Walks" - Karen Elson (A haunting song that perfectly embodies a woman's misplaced trust in the man she loves)
2. "Love Me Dead" - Ludo (Xander and Nicky's first encounter)
3. "Save Me" - Johnette Napolitano (Nicky's first hypnosis session)
4. "Die, Die, Die" - The Avett Brothers (Nicky's accusation of Xander in the chapel)
5. "Walking After You" - Foo Fighters (When Xander takes Nicky to the tire swing in the woods)
6. "The Ghost of You" - My Chemical Romance (After Nicky sees Xander in that fateful 
basement)
7. "Fires" - Band of Skulls (At the bonfire when Nicky sees Xander)
8. "Lost Cause" - Beck (After the explosion at the library)
9. "You Can Do Better Than Me" - Death Cab for Cutie (Nicky and Xander's fight at the party)
10. "Closer" - Kings of Leon (When Nicky remembers everything)
11. "I Will Follow You (Into the Dark)" - Death Cab for Cutie (In the basement, as Nicky and Xander say good-bye)



Friday, March 29, 2013

Points of Inspiration

The other day I wrote about how music inspires writing and today I want to focus on other muse-ish sources and mainly those that prompted me to write Always Me.

The story basically started with three things:

1. The Life Aquatic by Steven Zissou
2. My husband and I making violent threats to each other while bringing in the groceries.  Most couples share romantic declarations or whisper sweet nothings - my husband and I plot.  It's how we show we care.
3. This photo below:



This is Tatiana Romanov.  She was the second daughter of the last Tsar of Russia.  I’ve always had a sort of morbid curiosity when it comes to the Romanov family.  It’s a strange and tragic story that, only until recently was shrouded in mystery and conspiracy.  But left behind from these haunting lives is so much evidence—letters, furniture, clothing, jewelry, and countless photographs. 

Old black and white photos creep me out.  But I’m drawn to them like a crowd to a crash.  I study them with a frown because I feel like they could at any moment turn into a ghost story.  And everyone seems so sad and tormented in them.  This one in particular struck me.  It rooted itself deep in my psyche.  It’s her expression, right?   She’s this willowy, delicate beauty with such a stern, unabashed stare.  I wanted her to be a character.  I wanted to create a story for her that I could live in and be a part of.  I wanted to spend just a little more time with her.  And that’s where groceries and a Wes Anderson movie come in.

In “The Life Aquatic with Steven Zissou” Bill Murray’s character is married, though estranged to Angelica Huston’s character.  They’d been living apart but come together and have this undeniable connection and chemistry.  They just can’t get along.  And in one of those moments where they don’t want to be away from each other, but can’t stop bickering, Angelica Huston’s character tells Bill Murray’s, “We’re doomed to be together.” 

One bright, Texas afternoon as my husband and I were bringing in the groceries, we were making our usual, playful threats on each other’s lives.  He with his usual, “I’m gonna throttle you,” and me with my, “I’m going to stab you in the throat.”  (No need to call the police – we really do love each other, but I’m not romantic at all, I can’t do the sappy love declarations.  We get a kick out of this.  It’s fun for us.)  And after him wondering how we live with each other, I quoted to him, “We are doomed to be together.”  And there blossomed in my mind the story of two people who fall in love, but then act so atrociously towards each other, both irredeemable so that when they do kill each other, they are doomed to do so again and again and again.  Until they can—if they ever can, learn to forgive and repent for their behavior.  And that was my opportunity to create a longer life for Tatiana Romanov.  To share the world with her a little longer and give her the chance to fight for her life.

Eventually I’ll publish the prequel to Always Me, titled Inheritance of Storms.  The title comes from a Byron poem, Epistle to Augusta, and I think it’s well suited for Xander and Nicky’s story.  The stanza reads:
If my inheritance of storms hath been
In other elements, and on the rocks
Of perils, overlooked or unforeseen,
I have sustained my share of worldly shocks,
The fault was mine; nor do I seek to screen
My errors with defensive paradox;
I have been cunning in mine overthrow,
The careful pilot of my proper woe.

In honor of this post, I’m currently listening to “Photograph” by Weezer.

Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Queen of Arèthane Excerpt: Facing Dragons


 “Come with me,” Karawyn ordered, grabbing Emily’s arm and dragging her behind as she marched down the palace halls.  For a fleeting moment, Emily was reminded of the last time Karawyn had dragged her through these grounds, nearly breaking her arm, as the Elf Queen submitted to magical orders.
“Where are we going?” Emily pulled her arm free and hurried to keep up.
“You’re getting dressed, properly, and we’re going to pay someone a long due visit.”
Two servants pulled open Karawyn’s chamber doors as she slipped between.  Inside several elven attendants waited.  One held a long gown made of shimmery pale blue velvet. 
“Who?” Emily eyed the attendants with a frown.
“Don’t worry about that right now.” Karawyn nodded to the attendants who then began undressing Emily.
“Hey!” Emily complained as one unbuttoned her top and another attacked her sneakers, pulling them off as Emily’s balanced jostled. “Why do I have to wear…this?” She scowled at the heavy gown before her eyes grew wide when her bra was slipped off.  Cheeks burning, she covered her chest with her arms.  Karawyn sat on a bench, wearing her normal bored expression.
“Because it’s a formal visit we’re making.  Your human rags would be offensive.”
“Rags?” Emily repeated, but the word was muffled as the dress slipped over her head.  Her arms were pulled through the sleeves, ending in delicate silver embellishments just past her wrists.  The same design spanned the wide neck of the gown that rested just off her shoulders and clung tightly to her torso when buttoned.  Across her chest, the Star and Leafless Tree were stitched with similar, beautiful skill.
Once she was dressed, the attendants pulled her hair from its messy ponytail and with quick, nimble fingers began brushing and pulling the sides back into small braids, letting the rest fall across her shoulders.  When they were done, Emily glanced at her reflection in the mirror and thought she looked like one of those girls who visited comic book conventions dressed up as a character.  Only she was real.  Shaking her head, she turned to Karawyn.
“So what’s the rush?”
Karawyn stood up and left the room, Emily swishing after her in the long skirt.  As soon as her feet hit the stone floor, she frowned, having not realized the attendants had also placed and tied knee-high boots on her feet.
“This is our only real opportunity for now to make this visit.” Karawyn rushed down the winding staircase with an innate grace that Emily couldn't help noticing every time she moved. 
“Why?” Emily grew agitated at Karawyn’s coyness—she was normally so abrupt—as she gathered up her skirts to follow, hoping to not fall.
With a heavy sigh, Karawyn stopped and faced her.  “Because Aerath would not approve where we are going.  He would insist on coming, too, and quite frankly, his presence would do more harm than good.  So while he and Aelrah are out in the flatlands, we’re latching on to the opportune moment.  I’m perfectly capable of defending us, myself.”
She resumed her trek, pausing at the door only long enough to let another attendant secure a long, hooded cloak around her neck.  He slipped a similar one around Emily’s shoulders, its color a blue darker than midnight.
Once they were both astride horses, accompanied by a dozen guards clopping across cobbles before crossing a stone bridge, Emily asked, “Defend against what?”

Far away from the mountain hold of the palace, the horses seemed to fly, covering miles of ground at lightning speeds.  Emily had long ago grown accustomed to riding Arèthane horses; elegant beasts that seemed as fast and enchanted as their elven owners.
She knew why Karawyn brought her along.  Emily suspected the Elf Queen wanted to distract her from thoughts of Jarrad.  To probably distract herself from thoughts of Jarrad.  The time the Elders had decreed for his punishment had come and gone.  And still no Jarrad.
Distractions were welcomed.
Don't break down, don't break down, don't break down.
Emily glanced at the stony expressions of the elf riders within their group, untouced by emotion.  With a deep breath, she pushed the threat of tears back and continued on.
With the current climate of the land, the threat of Jabari’s army, and the burning villages, Emily worried for their safety as they traveled.  But the group seemed to move like the wind, slipping through forests and across meadows undetected.  They slowed only once the ground grew rockier, the horizon broken up by the large bodies of sharp, craggy mountains.  The air turned colder, her breath visible in small puffs.  Yet her cloak kept her warm without weighing her down.  More elfish magic.
The group found a path, small and threatening, leading along the side of a giant of a mountain.  Raising her face to the sky, Emily could not see its apex, hidden high above by clouds and its own height.  The sun had begun its afternoon descent and blazed its rays around the mountain’s side.  Squinting, Emily faced forward again, her grip tightening on the reins.  The path curved more sharply to their right, disappearing before a far off horizon.  And to her left solid ground stood miles away.  Her stomach in knots, Emily squeezed the horse with her legs and fought the urge to bury her face in his neck.
After what felt like a lifetime on the dangerous precipice, the path finally ended at a wide leveled off space.  There, what looked like the façade of a gothic castle had been cut out of the mountain within the opening of a giant cave.  Large stone doors were guarded on either side by men dressed in black leather, their faces covered by masks.  Each held a tall staff that had blades of fire on the end.  Something about them struck Emily as odd, something not quite right, but she didn’t want to get caught staring at them.
There was room on the portico for their entire group and the horses to fit.  They all dismounted with Karawyn leading the group to the entry.  One guard spoke.
“Welcome, Elf Queen.  What business do you seek of the Drakyth?”
“I wish to speak with Käärme,” Karawyn answered as she lowered her hood.  With the slightest of movements, she motioned for Emily to stand at her right.  Emily complied, lowering her own hood.  A fierce wind whipped her and Karawyn’s cloaks against their bodies, threatening to knock Emily off her feet.  It burned against her cheeks and brought tears to her eyes.
The guard’s gaze flickered over her and there she saw what she had not noticed before—what had seemed off about them.  Both had cat-like eyes; pupils long slits and irises that glowed bright yellow.
“You two may enter, but the rest may not.”  The guard nodded at the elf entourage.  The lead stepped forward and opened his mouth to speak, but Karawyn raised her hand, stopping him.
“Fine,” she agreed.
Stepping aside, the two guards drew the doors open, a slow process to move the heavy structures.  Behind them only darkness stood.  Though wary, Emily followed Karawyn in. 
They found themselves inside a great hall, as though inside the mountain had been hollowed out.  The roof was so high it hid in shadow, the walls the same.  They walked out on a stone bridge surrounded by a black void and before them a stone throne sat empty, guarded with two black-haired, pale-skinned young girls dressed in more black leather.
Halfway across the bridge, Karawyn stopped.  Emily frowned, wondering who or what they were waiting for.  But then she heard the deep whoosh above them, the shadows darkened by an even blacker shape until it swooped down before them, large leathery wings flapping.  Its cat-like eyes glowed yellow in the dark, sharp teeth gleaming as it hovered above. 
On a breath, Emily whispered, "A dragon."
An odd crackling noise echoed off the walls.  Before Emily could react, she heard a pop and then fire exploded from the beast's mouth.  Certain they were both dead, Emily cringed facing away as all around her vision was enveloped in flames. 
When she realized she wasn't burning and not in pain, Emily looked forward to see Karawyn with one hand raised, creating an invisible wall to protect them from the blaze. 
Then the fire died and the dragon dropped to the bridge, transforming in the process and as soon as he touched the ground, there was no longer a dragon, but a man.  Tall and pale with raven black hair his fierce beauty was punctuated by the yellow, cat eyes. 
He was also naked.
"Woah." Emily put up her hand to block the parts she felt inappropriate to see. 
One of the girls hurried to him, following as he marched toward Karawyn and Emily.  She tossed a long black robe around his shoulders that he further secured.
"Impressive, Sorceress Elf Queen," he said with a deep, hard voice.